djpretzel Posted November 23, 2015 Posted November 23, 2015 (edited) Same as with his Minecraft mix; pretty impressive production, need a look-see on arrangement, and would need a new title (again). - djp --- Your ReMixer name - Lombus Your real name - Liam Davis Submission Information Name of game(s) arranged - FEZ Name of arrangement - Disasterpeace - Forgotten (Lombus Remix) Name of individual song(s) arranged - Forgotten Additional information about game including composer, system, etc. (if it has not yet been added to the site) Link to the original soundtrack (if it is not one of the sound archives already available on the site) - http://music.disasterpeace.com/album/fez-ost Your own comments about the mix, for example the inspiration behind it, how it was made, etc. - A track from the FEZ OST as if heard through a 70's sci-fi film on a beat up VHS tape. More of a Rework than a full remix. Your email address - Your website - http://lombus.net Your userid - NA Edited January 21, 2016 by Liontamer closed decision
OceansAndrew Posted December 4, 2015 Posted December 4, 2015 This is a beautiful soundscape, but arrangement-wise it is too close to the original for me to give it a pass. I love the concept and idea of this, but I think I need to give it a NO based on the similarity to the original. I'm gonna right click-save-as, but for the sake of OCR, i gotta vote No
DragonAvenger Posted January 21, 2016 Posted January 21, 2016 Yeah, this is very pretty, but overall it's too close to the source. I'd love to hear a bit of expansion of the arrangement and some more personalization. Even stretching out the arrangement would help. NO
Liontamer Posted January 21, 2016 Posted January 21, 2016 Quote 4. Arrangement 2. Your arrangement must be substantial and original. Submissions must be different enough from the source material to clearly illustrate the contributions, modifications, and enhancements you have made. Acceptable arrangement often involves more than one of the following techniques: Modifying the genre, chord progression, instrumentation, rhythms, dynamics, tempo, or overall composition of the source material Adding original solos, transitions, harmonies, counter-melodies, lyrics, or vocals to the source material Yeah, it's a cool adaptation to piano, Liam, and I like the purposeful click/pops and ambiance, but the tempo, overall structure, mood, and tone of the piece are all too similar to the original. There's effort in personalizing the sound, but it doesn't stand apart enough from the original song. We hope you'll submit something else in the future; this was a cool listen, but the very conservative arrangement falls outside of our specific Submissions Standards. NO
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