Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate the time and explanations you gave. I actually wasn't going to work on this again, but I think I will as I have got quite a positive response from other musicians as well. Strings sounds like a good idea! I'll work on it and get back here.....
Cheers, and thanks for the support!
PS: I see you have posted a new track recently in the forums, unfortunately I really have no idea how to comment - I do enjoy your track though, good luck with the rest of the game's sound tracks!