This is really nice, but I think it needs some more variation and stuff IMO, nice breakdown though. The piano with the melody needs to come out a bit more I think, oooh and add a longer reverb effect to it, just don't swamp it with reverb
I guess if I was on a dance floor, I wouldn't really notice the gripes I have, but this is OCR; and stuff here gets noticed. A lot. I'm not the best critiquer, and hopefully other peeps will be able to fill you in more on what needs to be fixed.