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hey do you still have the vocals version of bloody tears inspired? I'd like to hear it.
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Hey you wanted feedback on your POKEMAN SONG. The feedback is: It's great! But that's not useful, so here's useful information:
0:00 - Try to separate your rhythm and lead guitars out more with EQ.
0:30 - mix shines - great stuff
0:55 - the syncopation is appreciated. IMO the whole song should have more syncopation
1:10 - it's kind of muddy, try to make it clearer with EQ. this may just be the MP3 quality from tindeck.
2:10 - the song is trying to be different melody wise, but it just sounds the same as the rest of the song. do something crazy to change it up.
Overall - try to vary the sounds a little more - it's a good song, but the entire track sounds like one big rhythm+lead riff (except for the section from 0:55 to 1:30, which was the best part, IMO)