It sounds really good, much better than before.
The only thing I noticed so far is at 1:23~1:25, the transition skips a little and jumps into the song. I don't think that's intentional, because it sounds like a file corruption, but it really distracted me, I kept going back to it to make sure it was actually there.
I listened to it a couple times, and then again in winamp, and it definitely skipped, and it says it's longer than it is, so I really think there's something wrong with the file upload.
Though I think it's just for me, because it doesn't seem that anyone else had that problem.
Other than that, it sounds great, and I can't wait to see you submit it. I really want this to go through.