AngelCityOutlaw   Members

Rock and Heavy Metal. My favorite genres. This song has a real punk feel to it in my opinion. I also love the song title. There's some good riffs in here and I love the little guitar leads peppered throughout. The growling type vocals around 2:35 or so just doesn't do it for me. Sorry I just really didn't care for that part at all.

I'd love to hear the second link. Sadly though, it gives me an error everytime I try to view it.

I'll crit as I listen. First off, love the title of the song. I like the strings themselves, but the rests in between the melody.....I'm not too sure how I feel about it. It sort of kills the vibe when it just stops like that. Now I hear a synth part. I like it's tone, but the way it's ascending and descending like that feels very mechanical. I get the impression that may be what you're going for though. While overall this is a nice mellow tune and I love it, I think the phrasing could be better. The one big complaint I do have, is a lack of any real climax. The track sorta just stops. There's no final cadence or big finish that would make me go "That was freakin' awesome!" and make me scramble to hit the replay button. That's just my opinion though. Sweet song though. I'll be sure to check out some of your other works! Keep it up!