Jaipurna

I like the comic strip, I didn't know there was a game. Your arrangement is very sweet. Although the main part is similar to the original, there's a nice introduction and a neat transition to the sea theme from ... something else. The ending may be a little abrupt, but that's a minor thing. Good luck for submission !

Boy oh boy, not much to criticize !

With the exception of the stiff and loud drums, this is a cool beginning. I'd like to hear more. Maybe you can try Monkey Machine : http://rinki.net/pekka/monkey/

EDIT : OK, let's pretend it never happened.

The part at 1:10 reminds me of "Go West" by the Pet Shop Boys but I'm not familiar with the source. The clap is a bit repetitve and loud for me. Maybe you could go a little orchestral near the end, but I'm not sure that's what you want to do.

Hello, I haven't heard the previous versions of the song but I like it the way it is. It's a nice complement to the ost.