Heh, well, what I mean is that your lyrics are cheesy, cliche, and have no real place in the song.
I know it's a love song, so you added lyrics that sounded like those of a love song.
I just think that you could have taken a bit more time with the writing and come up with some really well thought out lyrics.
Like I keep saying, I love your instrumental arrangement here, and for me, the lyrics just get in the way.