Larry, I think you should just NO the mix. I don't think the production is quick-fix enough to just warrant a conditional YES.
Great arrangement and lead sequencing, but those drum samples are so lame, and there are a lot of parts where the mix gets really hot. There's a lot of sizzle on those pads. Needs a lot of EQ work; rebalancing, that kind of thing.
Love that piano at the end. Really solid.
NO