Who wants to lend their thoughts on a potential XBLA title?

[zircon]

I'm currently working with a team of four other people on a turn-based tactical RPG that we're hoping to release on XBLA. I'm going to post more public information about this endeavor at a later date (screenshots, art, mechanics, dev blogs, etc.) but right now we're not looking to promote, but just for a bit of help in reviewing our concept pitch to Microsoft. If you have 15-30 minutes and would like to help out, post here or catch me on IRC (zircon - irc.enterthegame.com). Basically, you'll just be looking over a document and discussing what's in it with me.

The reason I'm asking for some help from "the public" is because the summary portion of the pitch is oriented toward people who have not played or worked on the game. None of us - the developers - are in that position, so we can't be objective. We're not looking for any design help (the design is all done), writing, art, coding, audio, etc. because we're not at the point where we're hiring contractors. That comes a bit later

[Matt E. Waldman]

Hey, I'd love to help! This is the game you told me about earlier, yes?

Does it have to be right now exactly? I'll be busy today, but I can review over the document later tonight!

[prophetik music]

i'd be glad to take a look at it. i've been working with a studio that's in a similar position - well, we're farther along than you, but there's a lot more people in the studio than what you're working with.

just send me a pm or email.

[Red Shadow]

busy with a day off, so sure

[Flare4War]

I wouldn't mind reviewing it.

[relyanCe]

if you need a creative writer/grammar nazi to give it a lookover, send it this way!

[prophetik music]

hopefully i was a help =)

[Sporknight]

I'll take a look, if you'd like. I'll hit you up on IRC sometime this week, or you can PM me what you've got.

[Reaif]

I'd be willing to give it a go. I've done a couple of pretty large scale editing/plot grilling/hole filling works on whole books that family and friends have written. PM me and I'll tell you what I think.

[BardicKnowledge]

I'd be willing to take a look zircon -- either e-mail me or call my cell (it's on Facebook).

[Salluz]

Yes, I am willing.