Oarfish (aquatic ambiance from DK Country)

[Mootz]

Just Downloaded SunVox yesterday and bled this out a few hours later. I am in love with the program and think that the sounds it produces are incredible. More people should use it it's free for Christ's sake!

[Pyrohazard]

Hes right, SunVox is awesome! It seems a bit complicated at first, but it didn't take me long to start making a song. Even though I'm not very far on it I can still tell it was more or less fast and easy.

As for the remix that was great. I actually get the same ambiance of the water theme but at the same time I feel like I'm in space. Good job.

[Chernabogue]

This sounds very good. I understand why you're in love with this program

I really like the ambiance of the song, everything sounds cool. The only (little) problem is that it's a little too close from the original. Try to add some original parts and I'm sure it'll sound perfect!

Good job!

[loomcore]

Holy shit! Thanks so much for introducing me to SunVox!

Also your remix is damned cool. Like Chernabogue says, make it a bit more your own and it'll be mint. Great job though

[Mootz]

Many thanks! I'll try to add a few of my own original touches. Yeah, Sunvox rules for cool, glitchy, atmospheric sounds.

[ambient]

I'm not familiar with the source, but this sounds good to me so far. Still, I am not crazy about that brassy lead.

[No Escape]

I can see where this mix is going. It's not bad at all, but needs a little work. The mix sounds heavy in the mid range ( it sounds echoey, borderline muddy) I can't tell if the low end is right, but I would guess it needs a little boost. Also, the mix is very loud, probably from the pronounced mid-range. It wouldn't hurt to add a little highs here (maybe between 8Khz and 13Khz). I would love to hear a little more variation throughout the comp as well. No real changes as far as I can tell. Again, it's not bad at all, just some ideas to consider.

[Rozovian]

The glitchy stuff is cool, but on the whole this is too conservative for ocr, and there's clicks and looped samples/stale synth waveforms in here. And the bass is too loud. I don't mind the lead, it lends itself well to the underwater vibe of the source, but if you're aiming for ocr you gotta arrange it more.