DragonAvenger Posted February 16, 2013 Share Posted February 16, 2013 (edited) Remixer name: Isacco Garcia Peveri Real Name: Isacco Garcia Peveri Email Address: No website USER ID NUMBER: 50520 USER ID NAME: Isacco Garcia Peveri Track hosted on soundcloud (downloadable): I made this remix when I listen for the first time original tune on FF I for Windows Phone version. That amazing music in "temple of Chaos" told me to make this personal interpretation when I was on the train, leaving office going at home... Ah, sorry for my AWFUL english (I'm writing from Italy). Enjoy. ------------ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VBCTn9d0bbo Edited April 4, 2013 by Liontamer closed decision Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vig Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Really too washy. The lead is buried. Gotta bring some brightness and personality into the leads. Those pads are taking too much space. Aside from that, try not to repeat things quite so much. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liontamer Posted March 30, 2013 Share Posted March 30, 2013 Really too washy. The lead is buried. Gotta bring some brightness and personality into the leads. Those pads are taking too much space. Aside from that, try not to repeat things quite so much. The lead's not totally buried, but it's certainly obscured too much. Aside from that minor clarification, Vig's right about everything. It was disappointing that 1:59 was basically a rinse and repeat of the opening verse, and 3:27's section was just mirroring the initial build, so there's really not much substance to the arrangement in the long run. This was a decent base, but the track's indeed washed out and the arrangement needs further substance and development. Interesting approach though, Isacco, I hope to hear more from you and you show potential. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkeSword Posted April 4, 2013 Share Posted April 4, 2013 Nice approach, but yeah, things are getting lost. Balance is off, pads are HUGE, percussion is super basic, lead is just sort of in the background, and it's pretty repetitive. Hit the Workshop and workshop this piece. It's rough, but with some work you could really get something nice out of it. NO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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