Benjaipod Posted April 10, 2015 Posted April 10, 2015 Hi everyone. What do you think of this acoustic remix of Song of Storms? I've just finished it and i'd like you to listen to it before i submit it https://soundcloud.com/benjaipod/tloz-ocarina-of-time-song-of-storms-remix-acustico Quote
cpr Posted April 12, 2015 Posted April 12, 2015 Hey that's a pretty cool one. Your Arrangement is pretty creative without being too liberal (the parts you added fit nicely with the original melody), I cant complain about the mixing (I really like the soft strings in the backround). I'd say your Remix has everything a remix needs, in my opinion. Quote
Benjaipod Posted April 12, 2015 Author Posted April 12, 2015 Hey that's a pretty cool one. Your Arrangement is pretty creative without being too liberal (the parts you added fit nicely with the original melody), I cant complain about the mixing (I really like the soft strings in the backround).I'd say your Remix has everything a remix needs, in my opinion. Thanks!! i'm glad you liked it! Quote
Geoffrey Taucer Posted April 13, 2015 Posted April 13, 2015 Ooooh, this is nice! Simple, but very pretty. I think it would benefit from some very light percussion. Some sort of hand drums, perhaps? Could perhaps use a little more variation towards the end. Overall very pretty mix! Quote
Benjaipod Posted April 13, 2015 Author Posted April 13, 2015 Ooooh, this is nice! Simple, but very pretty.I think it would benefit from some very light percussion. Some sort of hand drums, perhaps? Could perhaps use a little more variation towards the end. Overall very pretty mix! Thanks for your comments !! about the percussions, i tried some different latin percussion samples, and i finally decided not to use them. I think the lack of percussion gives an interesting atmosphere to the song. Anyway, thanks a lot ! Quote
Benjaipod Posted April 13, 2015 Author Posted April 13, 2015 Well, i submitted the remix the same day i created this post xD... wish me luck! Quote
Mikeaudio Posted April 25, 2015 Posted April 25, 2015 Man this is pretty! The only thing I would recommend would be adding more lows to your guitars. Because of the lack of percussion and other instruments, you can really take advantage of the sound of the acoustic guitars making it much more rich in texture and shape. Maybe adding a little more variation, not much though. I wish you the best regardless . Quote
jnWake Posted April 26, 2015 Posted April 26, 2015 Nice sound! I feel you went a bit overboard with the reverb and maybe boosted the high frequencies a bit too much. The intro in particular sounds way too washy. I agree with Mikeaudio about the lack of low frequencies, which is pretty noticeable in 0:57 for example. In any case, nitpicking aside, this is a very pretty remix. I like the soft strings in the middle. I also like how you used the ideas from the song in the section at 2:20, it sounds very good! Quote
Benjaipod Posted April 27, 2015 Author Posted April 27, 2015 Thank you both so much . I really appreciate your comments and advices, if this remix doesn't convince the judges i'll do everything you said to fix it. Thanks again ! Quote
NyxTheShield Posted May 3, 2015 Posted May 3, 2015 Another fellow Chilean, pretty nice arrangement, you even gave me a couple of ideas for an Swyward Sword mix i am working on ^^ Benjaipod 1 Quote
Benjaipod Posted May 5, 2015 Author Posted May 5, 2015 Another fellow Chilean, pretty nice arrangement, you even gave me a couple of ideas for an Swyward Sword mix i am working on ^^ Thanks, i'd like to hear your mix when when finished (weeena wn xD) Quote
NyxTheShield Posted May 5, 2015 Posted May 5, 2015 Thanks, i'd like to hear your mix when when finished (weeena wn xD) (Weeena man jajajaja Cuando lo termine te lo muestro jajaaja) Uhm so yeah, great arrangementent!! hahahaha Quote
Rockos Posted May 7, 2015 Posted May 7, 2015 Nice stuff. I hope they pass you. I listened to the whole song and this is awesome. The only thing you could get as a no is too sparse. But then again, this is relaxing and well made It should be okay as is. Awesome stuff. Quote
Daniel Pellicer Posted May 7, 2015 Posted May 7, 2015 I really enjoyed this ReMix. I like this theme a lot but normally what I find in different arrangements is that they insist in this urgence theme inherent in the game and it doesn't allow me to relax to the music. However in this ReMix I can just sit, close my eyes and listen in peace. By the way, why didn't you try to do a mod review before submitting the track? I've seen it can be really useful to have an idea of what the judge would expect from a ReMix. Anyways, I wish you good luck! Quote
Benjaipod Posted May 7, 2015 Author Posted May 7, 2015 Nice stuff. I hope they pass you. I listened to the whole song and this is awesome. The only thing you could get as a no is too sparse. But then again, this is relaxing and well made It should be okay as is. Awesome stuff. Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it I really enjoyed this ReMix. I like this theme a lot but normally what I find in different arrangements is that they insist in this urgence theme inherent in the game and it doesn't allow me to relax to the music. However in this ReMix I can just sit, close my eyes and listen in peace. By the way, why didn't you try to do a mod review before submitting the track? I've seen it can be really useful to have an idea of what the judge would expect from a ReMix. Anyways, I wish you good luck! Thanks for your comments !!... i'm kinda new in here, i really didn't know about that mod review thing xD. Next time i'll do it haha. Thanks again! Quote
timaeus222 Posted May 15, 2015 Posted May 15, 2015 I personally felt like your guitars were rather thin (lacking in bass frequencies), but that did help avoid muddiness before 0:57 with the thunderstorm sound. Mainly, I would check your performance and arrangement personalization. There were some timing issues, like at 0:58 - 0:59 on the backing guitar, and some intonation issues, like at 1:01 - 1:02 on the backing guitar and 3:06 - 3:07 on the leads. When the harmonies come in more overtly at 1:36, that was where it started getting better. There is a decent amount of personalization here, hopefully not too liberal (wanna do a source breakdown for this?). I think it was good to incorporate original content in there; Song of Storms is pretty short. Overall, somewhat cover-ish, but I think the arrangement is pretty solid. Isn't a very strong candidate IMO, but I think it's got a decent chance and has some good personalization; could be a tough call on account of the thinness of the guitar. Quote
Benjaipod Posted May 27, 2015 Author Posted May 27, 2015 I personally felt like your guitars were rather thin (lacking in bass frequencies), but that did help avoid muddiness before 0:57 with the thunderstorm sound. Mainly, I would check your performance and arrangement personalization. There were some timing issues, like at 0:58 - 0:59 on the backing guitar, and some intonation issues, like at 1:01 - 1:02 on the backing guitar and 3:06 - 3:07 on the leads. When the harmonies come in more overtly at 1:36, that was where it started getting better. There is a decent amount of personalization here, hopefully not too liberal (wanna do a source breakdown for this?). I think it was good to incorporate original content in there; Song of Storms is pretty short. Overall, somewhat cover-ish, but I think the arrangement is pretty solid. Isn't a very strong candidate IMO, but I think it's got a decent chance and has some good personalization; could be a tough call on account of the thinness of the guitar. Thanks for your comments. Some people told me that thin guitars thing too. I'll wait for the judges veredict and work in the mix again if needed... Thanks again! Quote
RebeccaETripp Posted June 2, 2015 Posted June 2, 2015 Very lovely. I like how much embellishment you included. I rarely hear that in remixes of this song. Quote
Benjaipod Posted June 3, 2015 Author Posted June 3, 2015 Very lovely. I like how much embellishment you included. I rarely hear that in remixes of this song. Thank you!! .. i'm glad you liked it Quote
Benjaipod Posted August 31, 2015 Author Posted August 31, 2015 where can i check if the judges heard this remix?.. it's been some time now and i have no news haha xD Quote
timaeus222 Posted August 31, 2015 Posted August 31, 2015 They probably haven't heard it yet; they're on the mixes at somewhere around November 2014. Quote
Benjaipod Posted September 4, 2015 Author Posted September 4, 2015 They probably haven't heard it yet; they're on the mixes at somewhere around November 2014. Oh, ok. I think i'll just keep waiting ...thx Quote
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