OceansAndrew Posted August 21, 2011 Share Posted August 21, 2011 original thread: http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=34490 ReMixer name - Eightman real name- Max V. Kravchenko userid - 32137 Submission Information: Title - "Fire move" link to remix - attached Name of game arranged - Doom troopers System: Sega genesis Name of individual song arranged - Mercury stage Hello! I think It ready to resub. Theres nothing more I can say.. Thank you guys for your patience and help! Your reviews always help to "normal" ppl improve themselfs! You don't know how you helped me! xD Special thanks to: OA, Clem, Halc and other great ppl from wip forum! Sorry if I forgot someone!! That was long time ago) Best of.. What do you want? xD P.S. Sorry for my english, if I said something weird) Link to the original soundtrack - Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OceansAndrew Posted September 12, 2011 Author Share Posted September 12, 2011 Definitely a lot easier to hear everything going on in this one. It's nitpicky, but some of the lead guitar tone was a little thin sounding. When the solo came in, that tone was much better. The ending was abrupt, but had at least a nice fadeout note to smooth it out, and the arrangement is still excellent. Drums are punchy and powerful, and the dynamics throughout are solid. The high pitched arpeggio synth in the breakdown is still a little piercing, but It seemed tamer than before, and it didn't bother me a ton. Nice work on the resub; I am very happy you stuck this one through. Yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonAvenger Posted October 5, 2011 Share Posted October 5, 2011 Wayyyyyy more balanced. Kudos, man, this arrangement it kickin'! Still some room for you to improve on production; the synth is still a little annoying, but much better, bass could maybe come up a smidge, and guitars down as well, but certainly a big improvement overall. YES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nutritious Posted November 30, 2011 Share Posted November 30, 2011 Mixing is SO much better now. I like the energy you've brought to the drums. DA's got some good suggestions above for sure - I wasn't really a big fan of the synth. Lead guitar performance gets a bit loose around the 2 minute mark, but nothing serious. As OA mentioned, ending felt kinda weak. Great improvements altogether though Yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emunator Posted December 2, 2011 Share Posted December 2, 2011 Yeah, there's nothing mindblowing about the arrangement or production here but I definitely think it's good enough, despite the slightly-annoying lead synths. You've got some cool sound design in your breakdowns that I enjoyed. Great drum writing here, I always like your snare sounds particularly Not bad man, keep sending stuff our way, you're improving! YES Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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