Hmmm. Maybe the space between the bass and the mid range (I dunno the exact hz) is a bit crowded - *tip* if you're using FL Studio...do NOT use Fruity EQ 2 - it completely distorts the lower ends and has frustrated me for years on end - ditch that shit and either use the Mixer itself or grab Voxenglove or something decent. Maybe a different crash sample, something "lighter" can't really describe it. It seems to be clipping a lot, probably due to shitty recording quality on the creator's end, not your fault there. I LOVE good breakdowns, like at 1:20~ area that is solid shit. Love the basswork. The strings are OK. Dunno if that's OCR bar passing or not. What sample libraries are you using?