Okay. this is the original, only it sounds worse.
the guitar sounds really bad to my ear. sounds dry and sounds poorly recorded.
frankly, the solo doesnt impress me, not so much because of the playing, but because of the sound of the guitar, the mixing, the recording.
goddamnit.
this mix becomes incredibly cool at 1:45. it more or less stays cool. the harmonics are very nice.
I'm very tempted to give you a yes, because after 1:45 kicks ass.
but the first half of your mix sucks. i want to hear you do it right and keep the second half as it is. i know someone will YES it and my vote will be meaningless, but here goes a
NO