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next deadline is August 22. 'substantial' wips, whatever that means

the chiptune bit sounds great, but i agree with emu about the abrupt transition. the timing works, but the complete change does make it seem tacked on. overall, the arrangement is well-paced with some good variations and fairly solid production work. that piano-ish synth bit that comes in every so often seems a little robotic and simplistic compared to the rest of the arrangement - like emu mentioned, there's a lot of room in those sections for some more expansive sequencing. it's on the right track, and getting quite close to the judges bar imo, but i think you should succumb to the influence of OCD and give it a little more polish before calling it finished. other posters have covered most of what needs to be said - try implementing a few more critiques others have left + spicing up some of the sequencing a bit and you could end up with a very nice product

hello all, i'm still alive. i've been recovering from moving expenses so internet access has been on hold for a couple weeks, but that shouldn't be a problem for much longer. hoping to hear some updated tracks/final wav's from you all soon!

just to let everyone know, my place of residence will be changing tomorrow and i will likely be missing from the internet for a few days until my girlfriend and I can get situated on a new connection. i'll address this thread as well as any PM's immediately once everything is set up. see you all in a few days

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happy birthday!

*excite* some awesome stuff on this album. looking forward to finally seeing a release

such an awesome mix, I couldn't imagine a better take on the source. amazing stuff

what else is there to say? bLiNd wins again

that's the spirit! and you better watch it, emu. consider yourself lucky my dkc3 tracks are already done

apologies. wouldn't have said anything if the track wasn't still green though.

internet sarcasm ftw

don't forget about Milkyway

this is definitely of interest to me as I live in downtown indy. always busy work schedules the week of gencon though, so we'll see.