halc

12 days until the WIP deadline, and almost a full tracklist! hoping to see some good stuff in the next few weeks

45 second ambient/wind intro; nothing wrong with that necessarily, and you have more than enough source usage to make up for that time, but there's very little development going on during on and imo it's just too long. i think the piano that starts at :42 could use a sharper attack, and the sample throughout is just a little too exposed for it's own good. there are some really low notes being played, as will as some pretty thick, dissonant chords that muddy up the soundscape at times. it seems like it's in 4/4 the whole time, but the 'one-on-da-floor' rhythm doesn't really support the melodies, and the phrasing ends up a bit disjointed and hard to follow at times. also, the piano sequencing is mechanical. needs more timing and velocity changes. arrangement-wise, you've definitely expanded on the sources quite a bit harmonically, and the transitions/meshing of sources worked fairly well, however (and I will defend pokemon music to the death) these source tunes are pretty harmonically awkward to begin with, and that aspect of it has carried into your remix. I'd have to go with a NO on this one, and I'm certain the panel would go the same way. first thing i would recommend fixing up is the piano sequencing with some timing/velocity edits. not bad, but there is still a lot that can be fixed or improved.

NO give up, loser <3 JKILUVU

happy birthday!

I find this disturbing. 0_0 care to elaborate?

http://ocremix.org/forums/member.php?u=33667

fixed that one for ya

me too <3 mycomputersucks

awesome mix. love the bass

just received another finished track from ProtoDome <3

i support this idea

moved to Post Your Originals!

http://ocremix.org/forums/member.php?u=33614 left a couple spam posts in workshop

okay, we have actually finished this. for any of you unaware of who my collaborator was on this, it was this guy, and you should look forward to hearing him on the Sonic 1 album as well http://halc9bit.com/remixes/astral.mp3 no title, bad tags, will fix later <3

good shit man

admiral pikachu of the colonial fleet

you're exactly right! try Tindeck the vocal samples are pretty goofy and out of place imo, but the slicing on some of them is pretty well-executed. some of your instruments are a little on the 'generic' side i'd say, and the kick seems pretty muffled. good buildup during the first half, but it starts to lose some momentum as it goes on, and needs more of a climax.

as if you need to ask :3

my track is done (edit: i must admit i think it is one of my best ) six down, six to go!

this was my favorite track from SotD. it's just too good.

happy birthday, mang