First, you really need to make your topic title your headline. Coming into this thread, I had absolutely no idea what was going to be in here because what you have is absolutely enigmatic.
Second, if not the title then at least put the gist of your post in the first paragraph or even the first sentence preferably. I read through the entire post and STILL didn't know what you were trying to say. Also rambling on about childrens' parables does not help focus the reader on your point. I would suggest some emphasis tags.
A more effective layout would be like such:
and then you can continue with the rest of your post
Personally, this is not my kind of game at all, but I can see how other people might like it.