Okay, first of all, thank you for taking the time to review my work, I was craving for feedback and I'm not disapointed !
The points you bring I agree with, and I can see those problems. That's a lot of things to change and work on, but that's okay since i have new guidelines to follow while fixing this piece. You can be sure i'll be back with a new fixed and improved version.
Btw, that's the first track i'm getting feedback on, and i'm really grateful you guys do this !
Back to work then !
Have a nice day/evening/night/whatever