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Hemophiliac

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  1. i didn't think i'd actually say this, but it actually kinda bothers me how similar in structure this is to Acrosst the Stars. it's probably how much it uses the same ideas and changes that AtS does. i was really hoping after the intro harp that it would change up and be less of AtS but it didn't.

    this is rather muddy and needs a lot of separation and clarity in the writing. a suggestion: instead of having a lot of contrabass stuff, have the contrabass part being played by the cellos an octave higher, and just have a viola part and 2 violin parts. i think that'll help with that a bit.

  2. time to rant...

    Venom needed double talk (Brock and Venom talking about the same time), as well as him saying "We" or "Us".

    this movie was poorly editted and was lacking in pacing, this movie could've been easily 20 minutes shorter, being dancing and emo parts cut shorter, oh and too many damn "walking" scenes.

    *SPOILERS* for some reason, right before spidey came in to receive the key to the city, i had a thought that one of the 3 main characters were gonna die. my reason for thinking that, in the previous 2 movies Spidey/Parker were both having shitty lives, and here everything was going way too well for him. also i felt that the end of the film was very anti-climatic, especially with Flynt Marko just going away <--random no resolution to crap setup earlier, sure he was forgiven but what about the other crimes that he committed? *SPOILER OVER*

    oh was anyone else annoyed by that weird 5 note brass motif that was continuously used in the music whenever the "darker" side of Spidey came out?

    rant over...

    i feel that the best character in the whole series was Harry Osborne by far, he had the largest character arc you could've possibly have had.

    anyone think that this isn't the end of the series?

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