Thanks, man! I appreciate the feedback. In the future, I will keep what you said in mind.

The intro sure is quiet, but it really sets the mood well.  I like it. I really like this arrangement, no surprise there.  Great dynamics and storytelling.  I love the instrumentation and part writing and all the varied ear candy.  I think this one is pretty close but there are a couple of remaining issues as the guys pointed out: - In the section from 1:40-2:17  there are a few sour notes here and there, perhaps have someone go over it with you to figure out how to fix them.  It's not terrible, just enough to feel awkward. - From 2:17-2:54  as Larry said, the backing strings and sometimes the piano are playing notes that are out of key. - From 2:54-3:51 the mallet backing instrument is playing a line that doesn't always fit in the key, and the strings are too loud here. - From 4:03-4:36 again there are sour notes in the backing elements. I like the music box ending.  So many cool ideas in this arrangement.  Generally the mixing is working well other than the loud strings at 2:47 and it wouldn't be bad to address the issues that Brad and Larry brought up.  The biggest issue here for me is the out-of-key notes that appear throughout the piece, mostly in backing elements but sometimes in the lead writing.  This is something you worked hard to remedy in your last resubmission and you did an excellent job of it, so I know you can do it with this one too.  Looking forward to hearing it again! NO (resubmit)

SO DAVID, to cut it short i think the roddenberry utopia is a fallacy. i would love to go in to this, but i would prefer to do it in PPR. why did you cut the forum????? because no one writes here anymore.     but i loved our exchange in 2019 or so. idk if it's still here. OCR was all about weird inspiratshun from VG. it all translated perfectly into talking about philosopha. wanna try something regarding that? can i open a thread about simulation theory? somewhere`?   we are gamers and we should talk about whats happening today through our very own lense. you like roddenberry and me too but your view is much different from mine.    mby lets start there; what do you like most about TNG????   i like the friendship of worf and troi and picard and riker and ginger doctor (name forgot) and stuff. ah yeah data. data is very important 2day. i HATE beaming and stuff. it's like cloning. spooky to me. so djp, let's disseminate why we both like TNG.     revive teh PPR     possible`???       drunk post

Simple but effective, this remix still holds up for me. Agreed that it improves as it goes on, but the simplicity kinda sets that up to work. Also agree that the ending is too abrupt, but otherwise 👍

I'm wondering if that video ever got made! Regardless, this piece is still hanging out on my playlist. Great take on the source, always a pleasure to listen to this smooth tune