Haha those captions! I submit that no one should attempt to pee in a tsunami. I'd be more likely to try to FLEE in a tsunami. But I digress.
Filtered intro, cool, but I keep hoping the filter is going to open more fully, the whole track sounds muffled. Those DnB drums and glitches are very cool. Seriously is there a high cut on this entire track, where are the highs?
The strings don't feel like they fit with the rest of the soundscape, somehow you've got to mix them so they sound like they are in the same space. At 1:02 the lead synth cuts through so well that it really sticks out from the rest of the muffled soundscape. That lead could also use some vibrato or filter movement, it is very plain. When the soundscape gets dense, the strings seem to make everything sound midrange-muddy. The piano sounds very mechanical, especially when it is exposed at the end.
I like this arrangement. I don't know this source so I'm not sure if I recognize it here or not. On a cursory listen it seems to be represented well enough, mostly in the strings as Wes mentioned. Regardless, the mixing issues are dealbreaker for me.
NO (resubmit)