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First of all, welcome to the forums! Thank you for sharing the story, I hope you'll be able to create more and more with time. It's lovely to hear a first attempt from someone new that's already pretty strong as is. I like this arrangement, it has the changes I look for in a remix. 0:16-0:21 and 0:24-0:29 Has a background synth off-beat and it feels like it lands on unusual beats as well. The synth works, but where it lands feels odd to me. It comes back later at 1:54-2:02 1:04-1:20 piano is SUPER loud, definitely look at reducing that some. Look at your drum fills such as 0:47 in the snare and add some more exaggerated velocity differences into those rolls so they don't approach "machine-gun" type fills. I find this is especially important when using acoustic-style drum samples. 1:46-2:02 Nice original additions. I dig the change to half-time right before it. Ending feels sudden and comes out of nowhere. How you ended is fine, it's just sudden. If you wanted to elongate that some it could help it's suddenness. I suggest to do a slow in tempo (ritardando) into the last few chords and hold out the last chord longer. Overall, very solid arrangement; there are just a few minor production elements that should be looked at. Awesome job!

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