Okay...
this mix has some issues.
the second half of the mix, in my mind, is much better than the first. what the first half is lacking is originality. while the drums are nice, what it sounds like for the first few minutes is the original with drums that dont really fit. It felt akward. There were occasional countermelodies, but ultimately it felt empty, and i'll repeat, the drums do NOT mix with the choir without anything else. i think this segment could have used strings to fill in the space.
the second half is better, but i think that the second half should have been used as the first half, and it should have developed from there.
NO, because the first half relies too much on the original. and the second half has a fair amount of clipping, too.