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composition wise or flp going corrupt ?

Here's my wip for battle 1... I don't think I intend to submit this to OCR, but it's here for you LoD fanboys http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/jxci/LoD_battle1_HoboKa_Stylin

oh...right forgot about that site lol.

Huzzah!! If you guys can get me a midi of the battle theme or another interesting one like a sad or mystical tune, then I'll definitely help contribute to this fantastic community!! By the way...if you guys need a real trite and hackneyed fan flick-based story line feel free to ask me, I might have a few ideas you guys may want to incorporate for a sequel...lol.

mine's already done and sent. Definitely an improvement too lol. Dunno how it'll compare to your guys' compos ><.

Scooby dooby dooby dooooo!!!! Like, zoiks, let's get out of here scooby!!

yummy x_x 10 char

Awesome theme. Here's my chance to shine

now thats an idea. Really annoying alarms eh. Richard Simmons alarms it is!!

I've lost probably half of the jobs I've done so far cuz of that x_x

I'll put in a more detailed critique later. All I have to say so far is that this is AWESOME . The organ sample is sexy too...I want that one x_x. I think that the arrangement is alright to me; but that's just me, and I'm a newb still.

wow abadoss, you either wake up early or stay up real late =P. Insomnia bites >_<

update: http://www.tindeck.com/audio/my/qzch/CT_factory_ruins_remixxx_3 double update..sorry about that: http://shup.com/Shup/35281/CT_factory_ruins_remixxx_4.mp3

aw fine . My parade has been rained upon. K i'll try to put some ridelin into my song and make it less ADD ish

it's not dull Rozo, just not your cup of tea - big difference. Regardless, the rest of your criticism has ground , thus I shall try to correct those errs. Right now though I'm more worried about arrangement than sample quality because this is only 1/4 done ANYWAYS, I've got a newer ver. with some changes, though I haven't employed your tips yet Rozo; I intend to though. link: http://shup.com/Shup/35147/CT_factory_ruins_ver2.mp3

coo, well your link-foo has improved young grass-hopper. Or is that interweb hopper? Oh well. Wow this starts off pretty kick ass ambient-y, nice acoustic guitar too. I think this needs to pick up faster though IMO. It's almost plodding because it develops slowly, but it definitely has direction, no frickin doubt here. Good start, just needs to change a bit more earlier. But I don't know if the J's will like this because they seem to poo-poo ambient songs a lot BTW an ambient, background-ish electric guitar playing harmony or something would be awesome IMsmellyO. Can you do me a favor now and try to review my WIP . Thanks.

http://shup.com/Shup/35137/CT_factory_ruins_remix.mp3 oh yeaaahhh, a very under-remixed song of an over-remixed game. Enjoyz.

maybe it's just my internet being a hobo, but I it says there's a problem openning the link =l

maybe you should get another admin helper or something Larry... x_x

I don't know how I could critique this, as this is beyond my skill lol. I really really like it though. You know the glitch-roll thing you do though? Make it really heavy industrial drums or something to make it even more epic >< PLUS I love your other songs on your site - I could learn a thing or two about atmospheric stuff from you ><

Rho, if you want me to do a 2nd one, which would you recommend I do ?

sorry I can't get any inspiration for this one.. =/

LOL your sig rocks Raziellink. Good bad...I'm the guy with the gun gotta love Army of Darkness, the world's most campiest thriller action flick evar.

sorry about the triple post lol. I finally heard the original. I like your take on it, it's very interpretive actually. So no problems there.

eh sorry about the example, it sucks actually. Disregard it lmao