You should totally call this "Barrel Roll" hehe
I actually dont think the vocals sound bad at all... especially since you distorted them... It gives it a feel that isn't very distracting from the rest of the mix.
Who all was in that beginning part? I know I heard Fox...
I still say it sounds great but I wonder if its "developed" enough for being approved as an OCReMix. They could say it seems repetitive... and without bass on my speakers its really hard to properly tell you what I think of this mix without having to download it, put it on a CD and listen to it elsewhere
EDIT: I wonder how voices would sound throughout the song and not just the beginning... kinda make it feel like you are progressing in the stage... use different quotes, obviously... but just as a continuity thing