Nice sound and solid playing !
What are you using to make the tone of your guitar? amp and mic, or some amp sim ?
If you want a little feedback, I think the mix in some parts gets a little confusing, for example in the beginning or in the end, some instruments clash, I dont know, It could be intentional to give the sound a sense of chaos.
Anyway, great playing, and if you want check the compos, especcially the regular ones
MnP and PRC, for me they are a great way to practice and experiment
http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?p=983606#983606
http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?p=983560#983560
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