Percussion is a rather annoying loop, not enough variation.
Lead tone is too similar to rythm tone; make them stand out more, either by using a more cutting tone on the lead, a less present tone on the rythm, or by simply making the leads louder. Or better yet, some combination of the three.
The actual performance, though, is excellent. Great writing and execution on the solos. I love the lead work, and I wish I could hear it better.