Blackwinged Saron Posted April 25, 2007 Share Posted April 25, 2007 this last mix is great, i don't know what to tell you about the vocals. they are phenomenal, the lyrics are great, and you have a wonderful voice. their is still something eerily awkward about the whole mix though. It's not bad by any means. Just different. Actually after writing that, I realized that's exactly why I like it. It's the perfect remix of a thoughoughly amazing piece of music. I say it's ready for its final runthrough. I hope it gets on here. Good luck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarBLaSt Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Dont listen to these amateurs! They are focusing on the wrong stuff. If you want help, aim me. ---> SuperStarBLaSt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnappleMan Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 The first good thing to happen to this thread since page 1! Listen to StarBlast, he's not half bad (not half good either). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 And likewise, don't listen to these "elitists", IDC if this makes it onto OC, its already burnt onto 1 of my new OC remix CD's so to u lamers who don't like her song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SnappleMan Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Elitists? You mean those of us who know something about music? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 lol. Yes. Although I'm trying to make my own music, so I know a little bit about it too. So Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kholdstare Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 Umm well, Hai! DragonAvenger, whom I've worked with on other mixes, contacted me about this mix a couple weeks back asking if I could help on the vocal processing. I said yes. So I tried playing around with it a bit, catchy tune I might add. I wanted to post this hear to get your reaction to it to see how it's coming along. I'm not sure about the flanger on the first verse, nor is DA sure about the difference in echoes between the first verse and the rest of em. SO let us know what you think, your feedback is much appreciated. http://kholdstare13.googlepages.com/fl6hopesanddreams_9.mp3 ~Kholdstare Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
avaris Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 The first verse with the flanger sounds off. The timing of the effect feels really off. IMO I'd use a vocoder on that first verse. Prob vocode the the vocal from 3:46 and on too. The high end on the vocals feels a lil dry throughout the song. Some more noticeable delay on parts of the vocals to emphasize certain words would go really well. The doubled vocals really add some nice variation to the mix. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tensei Posted August 3, 2007 Share Posted August 3, 2007 While the vocals are generally pleasant, It might be a good idea to add some (more) reverb to have them blend with the mix a bit better, and maybe play around a bit more with the panorama settings, especially at the doubled parts. Also, I think this needs an instrumental solo at some point, because apart from the vocals there isn't really any development throughout the mix, the instrumentation tends to become quite cut+paste, and I think some kind of rad electric guitar solo would totally put this mix over the top (though a piano, synth, or even a violin solo would work great as well). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mae Posted August 4, 2007 Share Posted August 4, 2007 You are Not Alone! is definitely begging for lyrics. I started writing some (not so good ones) myself a few years ago, but yours are definitely better. The first verse seems a lot choppier than the rest of the singing. Not sure if that's intentional or not, but it seems like it could flow a little better if you smoothed out that very beginning. I suppose it could be intentional, since the original and mix have a sort of choppier start. Two examples of how vocals might sound smoothed out. First verse smoothed out, in my natural singing voice, a bit lower than yours First verse, just smoothed out, in my higher voice I'll be looking forward to hearing your finished product. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kholdstare Posted August 5, 2007 Share Posted August 5, 2007 Alright, I've taken a look at these suggestions and can definitely see them put into place. Part of these ideas were swimming in my head as i posted this but i wanted to get it out there. So.. I'll take to looking at the mix and implementing stuffs. Thanks for the help, ~Kholdstare Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idir Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 BRAVO ! Excellent ! I love , i'm french and i love the sound of the voice ! This song is beautiful with this sympatic lyric !! I found of this Single !! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
idir Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 So we haven't got no more information from this job ? I'm really to know this project is Stopped. Bad News. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonAvenger Posted September 2, 2008 Author Share Posted September 2, 2008 Wow, talk about back from the dead! Honestly, this piece is pretty much dead. It's not good how it is, needs a different style. I'd have to rerecord the vocals. No one's interested it seems. Maybe someday, but until I get a better backing, nothing's happening to it. Sorry to dissapoint. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HoboKa Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 what? noooooooooo! I demand a re-attempt, at least T_T Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mae Posted September 2, 2008 Share Posted September 2, 2008 Thanks to idir for bumping this thread. I figured this remix would have been in full production by now. (I've been lazy with checking out the site overall. I figured I may have even missed it being posted). You already put in the effort to write the lyrics, and asked for feedback on them. Why not at least give it another shot? You say no one is interested? Do you need someone to help with the music? Or do you think that even if you did finish it up, nobody would be interested in listening (even though there's still a few of us chiming in again now that this thread has been temporarily revived)? If you need someone to help with the music - give the lyrics another shot. Get them to sound pretty dang good, and then spam some inboxes, lol! I've actually kind of started to associate the original music of You Are Not Alone! with the lyrics you wrote. I'd like to hear a finished version. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megshin Posted September 5, 2008 Share Posted September 5, 2008 Well I still have all the old WIPs and you can't stop me from enjoying them on my iPod! Till the day the finished is done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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