it's very cheezy tho innit? i reckon it could be very nice cheeze once the arrangement is fiddled out. but the melody (the very sugary one) sounds very different at this bpm and groove.
i tried to make it gain bpm for a while, so it goes back to the energy of the original the more the song goes on, but couldn't get it to work.
so, gotta optimize on the "good cheeze" part.
that's why i have this nagging feeling that i'd rather start a different mix, for now :S
but maybe i'll come back to this one. with a fresher mind. heh :)
this one needs a lot of cool soloing and stuff if it's gotta pass the "really good cheeze" marks, ......and stuff. i kinda still lack agility for that.
or you make it really minimal and full pop, or....whatever.
idk what to do with this right nao! haha. it's ok i guess.
ty for comments!