everything is so distorted. intentional? if so, my first piece of advice is to not do that. if all of the fuzz was gone, this wouldn't sound half as bad, even if it is texturally thin.
aside from that, a lot of your instruments (including percussion) sounds like it has some pretty wide stereo spreading going on, which works for some elements, but when you stretch out the whole mix like that, it just ends up sounding empty and thin. try widening background elements, pads and such, and then use some basic L/R panning to fill the space with the rest of your instruments.
some of the delays and reverbs are also a tad bit obnoxious at times and cause some bleeding between sounds.
lastly, echoing Larry's concern about the EQ; lack of a high end, the low end is there (the kick) but it sounds muffly, and other than that there's not really a very strong bass presence.
anyway, hope this didn't come off as harsh, I just wanted to provide plenty of critique. the arrangement definitely shows potential, and I look forward to hearing where you go from here.
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