http://fishy.escariot.net/public/Mistaken%20Love%20v.2.mp3
Right, heres the new (and hopefully) improved version. I spent a while tweaking and turning, doing lots of automation on the main leads with filters. Obviously I'm new at it, so tell me where I went wrong.
Also if you listen to the old version then this one, you will noticed how much louder this one is, a lot more power. I used lots of scream devices on random sounds and they've been beefed up quite a bit. I also took avaris' advice and filter out all the low end on everything high up. Thanks for all the advice from everyone, what do you guys think of it now?
note: I will make a new ending.