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  1. Hello!! Happy New Year and Marry Xmass!! This mix has lots of issues but arrangement is ready I think.. In first view too much reverb and may be compression. Then some bass guitar play issues. And at last I forgot to make fade-out effects in some places and of course mastering problems. I'm drunk.. This is my excuse:mrgreen: Here is the mix: And the source: Happy New Year and Xmas!! Again! And THANK YOU!! AWESOME holidays to You guys!!
  2. It sounds to me like half of the track is intro. You waiting for something.. Something hit your head and blow your mind or something. But nothing happens. Too long imo. As I said before, something is missing in this part of mix. Everything great in stereo(right, left), but expecting for something goes in center.. My opinion about drums in this part remains same. Now about climax. Don't get me wrong! But I don't hear drums section at all. And hi-hat in left channel drives me crazy in bad way unfortunately. Sounds like mad snake:-? Too much in highs and I don't feel any power in drums. This reverb makes your drums too far from AWESOME guitars. I'm as good in explanations, as in english.. Sorry. Try to force your drums and don't use reverb at all. Hear what happens and I think you will know what to do. Use some EQ on it (in mid-highs I think and try to force 1-2db in low). I think you'll understand that drums needs some power and light reverb in most cases.
  3. About intro: Nice electronics(what are you using??), but not interesting. It may be changed if you use here powerful synth drums with some velocity figure or distorted drums with same effect(which you have now) or something. You have nice imagination, so I think its not problem to you(made cool effect). Otherwise, its kind empty, some "far" effected guitar will be great to fill it. Everything I said is just in my opinion. Now solo goes!!! Awesome!! But drums.. I don't think this drum's reverb fists to your awesome lead. Too long, to fat, too much imo. Same with overdriven rhythm guitars to me. Sounds kind wrong to my ears. I think if you take your lead for basis to chose sound effect for rhythms and drums in this section, you find some more power and beautiful. Outro: AWESOME!! I've got nothing to say. P.S. Sorry for my english
  4. Forget about that!! Awesome Work Dude!!
  5. I agree with Subnormal. Great work!! But you destroyed awesome guitar section from one of some prev version, which only needed some cool slap-bass.. Shame..
  6. Dude.. Sorry. But I don't hear anything here. There is nothing in this mix. Half of the track - intro, half of the track - outro. Otherwise, good samples. And I think you can do better. Use you brains. Good luck!
  7. Good as always!! I don't like much rhythm guitar distortion. To much in mid freq, but its personal. And this track not so interesting.. Sorry! But it may be changed if you find vocalist. Cause instrumental tooo empty for me. Yea! I know! My tracks more empty sometimes:mrgreen: After all this mix is clean and perfect in sound! As always. But you may change drums samples, to make them more live. And one thing. Do you have any lyrics? Or at least vocal melody? Cause I can try. But you better find someone like Cyril for this track, I think.
  8. From 0:22? Hm.. I don't hear something wrong on left and right rhythm. But centered rhythm may be.
  9. Hi!! http://ocremix.org/forums/showthread.php?t=32390 As you can hear I'm suck in guitar solos. I need help with this remix. And as it is a collab, your ideas about anything for this track are more then welcome. You just can help to one n00b to became a remixer. So this is some kind of charity:mrgreen: Anyway, if someone interest(or just like that mix) post here or in remix's thread(feedback will be great too) or PM me. Thank YOU!! Sorry for my english.. just in case:-)
  10. I like those effects on the strings in intro, but gman still somewhere far for me(I repeat! For ME! It is personal). Everything great! It is more then finished! But some strong slap-bass in outtro will be awesome to complement amazing guitar. Hope you understand my english:mrgreen:
  11. Wow! Good additions! That dude in intro awesome and I like how mix starting after intro. But "that dude":mrgreen: missing around those strings, string's reverberation may cause it. Same problem cut my ears in "after intro" when wah guitar leading awesome melody. Those strings reverb too fat, I think. But it may be personal. Nothing more I can to say. Everything AWESOME, great outro. With this additions your mix sounds different in good way. Can't say more, cause using bad headphones now.
  12. Your game have MUGEN engine? I checked your link, watched your screen shots and. I don't understand what is the style of this game. Looks like platform (Mega man like). Just don't get it.. Sorry. But I'm interest! I made my own mugen fighting, some time ago. You should make some video for more understanding. Sorry for my english.
  13. I'll be waiting:mrgreen:

  14. Hey! Did you get my pm?

  15. Someone checking project's forum? Cause I posted there my wip and hope for some feedback:tomatoface:
  16. Yeah!! Finished! I think. You may change your stats to Mod-review. Great work!! Great guitar play! Edit: Or submit right now!)
  17. Hmm.. Now it sounds more clean to me but still have something "22kHz-ish". I mean your mix sounds somewhere "far" from ears. I don't know what cause it, but I think it's mastering problem( I repeat! I don't know what cause it! Just thoughts). P.S. Dunno how judges react on those strings, cause I heard VERY cheap sounds in some of OC's remixes. P.P.S. Edit your first post and go advanced to change thread's stats.
  18. No words! It is a "nightmare of a dream"!! One of the best electronic things I ever heard!!
  19. Your mix sounds like 22kHZ. Dunno why, but you may try use some EQ. After that its FINISHED! I think so.
  20. Thanks for take your time on it. I understand what you saying about lead. I just started to play leads so Ill improve it in time, I hope. And low freqs will be filled by bass-guitar or something another bass's sounding:mrgreen: Thanks again!
  21. As you asked about feedback on specific parts in drums. I have to say that from 0:32 to 1:04 they sounds pretty simple to me. And same repeats from 1:22 to 1:28. And I don't like how sounds that cymbals which goes in center then right, then center etc.(hope you understand). It remind me Magix Robota's sound). But otherwise this simpleness fists to those parts of your mix. So maybe you don't have to change it. After all everything is great and some more highs in EQ will be the finishing touch. I think. As I said before I'm not good in feedback, but I may try to write drums for you using my samples if you want:mrgreen:
  22. I'm back to this! Now its way different and I want to submit it(well.. try to submit). Theres no bass for now, cause I have some problems with my bass guitar. I'm hoping for feedback, cause this mix have potential, I think. And Your advice and critics are more then welcome!! I used here some orchestration and I like how this orchestra-metal sounds. http://tindeck.com/listen/zpct Thank you for your time!
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