Mak Eightman

Awesome!! From :58 I wanted to die!! It was great guitar play!! As for the critiques.. Bass and drums.. Nothing wrong except unreal sound.

Wow! That sounds better to me! Interesting effects, some kind interesting drum's figure, but sometimes drums too simple(hope you understand). I don't like how drums sounds. Specially snare(what do you use for your drums?). And may be you try some different kick's sound? Or maybe use some EQ in mid-high on it with mid or hi attack in compression. It may help, I think. Cause kick overpowered for some reason. Then you may use some more highs in EQ for full mix or in some sections of it. After that you could try to do something with mastering.. See what you can do, hear it. Also I don't like Wah guitar's "paning". Sounding in center will be better, I think. And phasing rhythms.. something wrong to me with effect itself, but it's personal I guess. GREAT MIX and WORK!! P.S. Don't take too serious any feedback. Its YOUR mix after all. You may use some advice or not:wink: But its pleasure to me, that you follow my word:mrgreen:

Get drunk after work, take guitar, run plug, turn on AIMP with all of music I have in my comp, start play everything what is in play-list. Than remember about something.. Go eat. Return to comp and write leading melody in midi. Then write drums, then record bass guitar, then rhythm, then make some electronic or something, then try to play guitar solo, then listen what I've done and sure that I'm terrible in solos, then forget about everything and go sleep. Post on wip forum that bullshit tomorrow.

I like goat's lead guitars everywhere in his works. But still I don't like his drums, but after all you listening only guitars) This mix is AWESOME!!!

WoW! Cool! And you have a BEST DRUMMER ever in your band!!

The only thing in my mind is two heavy rhythm guitars strong left and right, lead guitar in middle. About drums.. I like source's drums more. You making heavy thing, so make your drums heavy too. Make some interesting figure with your cymbals. And I may be wrong, but I think you use too much compression on your drums(but I may be wrong). After all I like your vision, your guitar play and arrangement itself. And I'm not so good in feedback cause I'm still a n00b, but try to use something I said. Maybe you like it)

Thanks! Fun ideas? Actually I have one.. But I'm waiting to by some Pod or something.. For clean sound.

Hi! Some time ago AMT made remix of TWEWY(I don't actually remember what calls that game). Anyway that was awesome remix(dunno about source btw), and I wanted to try what I can, cause I just joined OCR that time and music itself:mrgreen: So I asked Austin to give me his vocals of that mix and .. AMT's original: My remix, AMT's Vocals(except 2.44, that was mee): That was long time ago and it wasn't colab(unfortunately). I know that my bass's play is not so good(terrible:mrgreen:), I know that my vox at 2.44 sounds bad( what do want from me?? I'm using line-in of my cpu's simple sound card and cheap karaoke mic and soft:mrgreen:). Some times that mix sounds like bullshit, but who cares?!! I love it!! P.S. Hope You don't mind AMT..

Yeah! Thats better! But when I listening it I hear distorted drums in my mind.. But this one is awesome too!!

Wow! Great thing man!! I love that synth! You remind me about my album!! Thanks!! Cause I completely forgot about it! Since you said you wouldn't mind having some more fun with those drums.. May be you try? Retro synth? If this is retro, then I love retro:mrgreen:

Thanks everyone!!! sggod89 Your stuff is awesome and I really thinking to by some DigiTech GNX-1(this is the only thing I can buy, I guess). Jabond.. Well I've got nothing to say)I love Your stuff) And I using some of your advices) Kadmium.. WOW! Thanks a lot!!! I think I spend lot of time before I can understand some of Your's words:mrgreen: But most of them clear to me and THANK You again!! It was kind of lesson!! Sonic, I have guitar rig 4. And actually now I getting closer to lvl up. Thank You all guys!!

I told you before about sound. And.. Your lead melody sounds out of tune. Too long intro. I think you forgot about drums. Make your drums strong and fast. Fill bass line of your mix, cause it's empty to me. Well after all I'm not the only one:mrgreen: Good Luck!!

Mmm.. I thought that was Dyzzy's theme.. Well anyway, sounds too midi to me(but lots of ppl like that sound). About arrangement I can say only one thing: COVER. And organ sounds not on it's place. If your guitar is real, then you play great and you can do something better then this.

I like how it sounds from the start. Clean and melodic. It was interesting what goes next. But next came boring. Nothing wrong with sound or arrangement. All is good. But boring. And I don't like snare sound, same as bass(too "midi"). Well after all I think you can try to submit it. I don't know the source, but I think ppl'll like your mix) And btw!! I really like piano and cello sounds! Submit it.

Great! Great play! Clean sound. Nothing wrong with mastering and sound to me. Little more Highs on EQ will be great. Everything is fine! But not interesting. Sounds like cover. Not remix. Make it longer, give some awesome guitar solo, more creative!! Everything is great in production!!!! Just CREATE something:wink:

About Your "Scrap Brain".. As Rozo said You need to listen other mixes. I don't understand why all of your instruments in one(right) channel? Also I don't like drums section. Some dynamics and "soft" power will give em nice level in sounding. You have lot of instruments in one channel, as I said before. This is cacophony dude. Separate your instruments and use some EQ on each instrument and on entire mix. Listen what are you doing man. Cause I have a feeling that you not. I hear something interesting, somewhere far far away, but hear:wink: Listen Rozovian's, halc's and djp mixes(sorry I don't know more ppl in electronic. I'm rocking badass:mrgreen:) Good luck!

Sorry:mrgreen:

http://nintenjoe64.bandcamp.com/track/always-wrong-vox-by-cyril-the-wolf

Well as I expected) Awesome sound! Interesting sections! But some kind boring.. Metal core or something? I think so before "Olympus is Falling" starts! Then "Hero's Battle", then "final sunset"!! AWESOME!! And Cyril The Wolf Amazing! And you killed my brains when Lady Gaga appears:Dlool!! I never thought about pop's girls sounds in metal/rock/other stuff. KILLING BRAINS!! In goood way) Great job!!!! Waiting for more.. F#*k!! I wish I had Your sound and play guitar as You are!

Thanks for your time) I'll be honest.. I don't know whats mean "high end" As I said before, I'm n00b in music stuff and terminology) Actually I have lot of problems with feedback understanding.. Plus I'm not strong in english. Well lots of problems) But I'm trying to understand.. I also like that therm escapes you) btw.. I don't use EQ on guitars, not on this album, not on any of my later posts. I just can't find it. I'm trying, but cant find! Thanks again!! P.S. "your guitar playing seems spot on my friend"??

Wow! That was noise. Thats all I have to say. As AMT said your drums may be interesting if someone hear they. I like bass, but only because its clean to hear. And it seemed to me that you just copy bass-line from original midi track and paste it with sound changing. Hope I wrong. But idea pretty nice. And maybe you try to use mp3's link to post. And I was waiting for something "strong-kicking" after bass intro. Sorry for my english:mrgreen: P.S. Hi AMT!

I mean..) I don't get You clear) My english.. You know:mrgreen: What's wrong with me?? Oh btw! Dead Moroz - "Poligon"

Well as You said.. "CRITIQUE AWAY!!!" This mix great. And if you want to make it greater, maybe You should try play guitar solo to replace synth solo(just an offer) or make Your synth little "closer". Same to the drums. Try and maybe you like it. Also I like that laugh. It sounds in needed place to me, well maybe stronger fade out in the end. I can't say anything about orchestra. I just like it. And I don't know the source too. P.S. Still I have to say.. Kick to overload..

Well.. Rozovian clearly said as always. And to much compression for me.

I try once. But it stuck on wip. Not so awesome and pretty liberal. Well anyway http://mak.official.fm/track/132916