Loud:-D
Over-compressed. You can hear it clearly when your rhythms comes in and, some other places. Lead synth at 1:14 louder then lead guitar, sound not good imo. Overall I have a feeling of two different mixes. First you made electronic stuff(synthes,drums,etc), mastered it and saved. Then you recorded guitars(all of them) mastered em and saved. And after all, you put this two mixes together and compressed. To much different between guitars and rest of the mix. Also vocals sounds kinda distant(as and guitar leads(solo at 4:00 too) btw). At 2:01 rhythm synth killing your vocals completely. Again balancing issues, plus over-compression.
I forgot to say you before.. That harpsichord sounding thing at 2:44 is too loud and some incorrect EQ'ing on it, i think. Try to drop mids a bit. Cause with rhythm guitars it muddying your mix.
That is all I think.. Mastering issues. Also I love that 1:00 transition!)
Good luck dude!!