Yea! Right direction! You almost there!
20 times listened.. almost perfect! IMO!
Some changes and additions you may be want to try:
-Rhythm synth at 0:41(and everywhere it appears) will be good to pan it left and right. This will compliment your rhythm guitars and, as you maybe remember, free some space for bass.
-Bass-line from 1:01 to 1:28(main riff) kinda empty. Not because of freq problems. Because of writing. Remember my version's bass-liine? Constantly.
-1:14 lead synth still too loud imo(not a big deal after all)
-At 4:20 lead guitar need some background lead guitar in high notes(something like lead synth at 1:14). Check this lead very carefully, maybe you'll find some more places for backing high lead.
-Harpsichordy thing.. Pan it to rhythm guitars. It will free space for vocal, which is muddying by it for now. Damn! I don't know what is wrong with it! But I'm sure something is wrong!
Do that only if you agreed with that! This is only mine thoughts.
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