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*NO* Final Fantasy 7 'Somewhat Breezy' *FT*
Protricity replied to Protricity's topic in Judges Decisions
vig is right. The middle section is in some need of bass and a drumset going. There is indeed a lot of off in the middle section. As for the rest of the song, it is well played but note for note with the original prettymuch entirely. Work on melodic variation, less off notes in the middle, and get a drumset even if its not real NO -
*NO* Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time 'Dance of Storms' *FT* *RESUB*
Protricity replied to analoq's topic in Judges Decisions
This song feels like eating a rice cake. Its definately food, but lacks any taste. The main problem here ofcourse is that this is little more than a minimally arranged original tune. The subset problem would be that no more than one or two musical instruments are ever active at a time. This song is in dire need of some real arrangement love. Better bass, an accompany, anything. NO -
OCR01056 - *YES* ICO 'Save Me (OCR Edit)' *FT*
Protricity replied to Israfel's topic in Judges Decisions
Dont know why I missed this post. Wont hold this one up any longer YES Nice solid trance, but what I liked was how it broke away from the 'typical trance' genre in many ways. Typical SuperGreenX quality -
*NO* Legend of Zelda: Majora's Mask 'Final Hour Fatal Error'
Protricity replied to djpretzel's topic in Judges Decisions
Really like that intro beat Nice. Ack that bell is so damned out of place and off key :( : : :( (:: : ( (: ((:(( : Fix that off key Bell that just kills the song towards the end. Make it longer, probably by bringing in the 1:00 section in again towards the end or something . Do this and you got my YES NO -
Now this is well used dissonance I really likes. Problems here are mainly the over-use of drumloops and constant repetition. DAMNIT> I really like this one. The drumloop thing is a minus, but this song really had the dissonance feel to it. Very nice. YES
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Poor recording. The rapping is pretty good, but the real question is, "is this a game music remix?". Its the four same notes again and again. Hell, you could rename this as a chrono trigger 'magus remix' and no one know it was from Herzog Zwei. I think more has to go on in relation to the original song and game thats more than 4 notes. NO Work in an actual 'game remix' into this and resubmit. I really liked it
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Lemme guess. Reason? 1:30 has passed and the song hasn't started yet which makes this a 2 minute song 2:30 has passed and its still nothing more than the chord structure of the original. And now it ended.. This works as an intro to a longer song but not as a song in itself. NO
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Extremely messy intro. Very bad with the poor sync and the delay There is an extremely large amount of off-notes in this song. Work on the keys and off-notes. NO
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*NO* Final Fantasy 8 'Desperadoes' (RESUB?)
Protricity replied to djpretzel's topic in Judges Decisions
Ahh. the good ole' formula never gets old eh? This is probably the best of the remixes I've heard of this song, but it still adds very little over the original save for a bunch of insane crazy drums and drumloops. The same repetitve synth goes over and over and never goes away. No variation. Work on variation and arrangement and dont rely on simple drums and drumloops NO -
Very short and the lone synths with no accompany = no no no... Its just too weak as it is. This song doesn't have any real meat. It jumps from one idea to another. It works as an intro, but I feel this song should be twice as long. NO
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Pretty good but pretty short I liket he improve, but this mix lacks in the percussive. The drumloops never change. The ending is weak and the song doesn't vary much at all Work on more variation and some real beats, not just drumloops. NO
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Repeat Repeat Repeat The pads are cool, but the rest of the song is a great deal of repeating and annoying hiphop breaks. The beat never changes. The melody is that of the original. Work on arrangement. NO
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OCR01058 - *YES* Breath of Fire 'Flames of Valor'
Protricity replied to djpretzel's topic in Judges Decisions
This is very nice!! Can anyone verify that this isn't an SPC rip or something? I'd hate for that to happen again. Other than that, this is ace Very nice. YES -
Interesting variation. However, the variation involved in this mix has a few off notes and the like. The rest of the song is exact with the original. Work on the variation and make the song your own - don't just rip the bassline and piano etc etc. NO
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*NO* Tetrisphere 'Junsei na Kyuu (Perfect Sphere)'
Protricity replied to djpretzel's topic in Judges Decisions
Wow. This sure is tetrisphere Theres quite a bit wrong with this mix. Half way through, these floody synth strings come in and mess everthing up. Other than that, everything is like the original with less tact. NO -
Pitch bends and drumloops are just too randomly spaced. The arrangement in this song is really lacking. This is more of a 'look what I can do' demo than an actual song. Its like a guy on a keyboard messing with all the options. Work on the arrangement more NO
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NFS rip + drums. Some of the bass is off key. No Override
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At :54 the groove falls apart. I really really hate that lead. This is rather note for note with the original + dance beat. Yea.. thats what its turning out to be, unfortunately NO
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This indeed sticks very close to the great original and wherein lies the problem. Its nowhere near as good as it only uses guitar and rather static beats. Its basically a far simplified rendition of the great original and nowhere near the same level of quality. Guitar could be played a bit better as well. Its nice to see someone take on such a hard remix challenge though NO
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OCR01063 - *YES* Super Mario Bros. 3 'Lose-Your-Way Maze'
Protricity replied to djpretzel's topic in Judges Decisions
Way short to be a 'song'. Work on length. Improv was decent but nothing special. NO -
OCR01054 - *YES* Flashback 'Nostalgy Dimension'
Protricity replied to djpretzel's topic in Judges Decisions
Really like the feel in this tune. Very chill. I like the solo. Nothing wrong there. Really like the feel of this song. Great job. Nothing else to say but YES -
I agree with vigilante. Its note for note with the original along with some rather annoying synth leads. NO Work on arrangement