I played this game quite a bit when I was younger, and I was quite fond of this source tune.
Intro was great but you lost me at :28ish, when that fakey mechanical sitar comes it. Coupled with big sustained pads and very weak percussion, the whole thing feels very lethargic.
The variation in this piece is pretty nice though, but I think that the production issues mentioned by other judges are hurting it.
You should look into some better samples and balance them better. 2:50 especially feels a bit crowded.
Cool piece, I'd like to see some revisions.
NO, resub