SonicThHedgog Posted October 24, 2011 Posted October 24, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/aires/dem-chemicals Album version/live version http://tindeck.com/listen/fhsu Ocr version/weakend version (subbed) Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 2, 2011 Author Posted November 2, 2011 http://soundcloud.com/aires/dem-chemicals-reuploading reuploading today Quote
Calum Posted November 2, 2011 Posted November 2, 2011 I enjoyed this. Although my feeling is that sometimes the huge bass at around 2.00 was a little out of time - it came in just after the 2nd beat but a little too soon. Also in terms of the timing, the section around 1.26 where you were glitching and playing around with the timing, i didn't feel like it stayed in time - although I could be wrong. I felt the sense of time was lost at this point - perhaps make it more rhythmically defined. Also the bit at 1.36 only came in ONCE! That's my fave part of the original - I'd love to see it return at the end perhaps. I'm certainly not a house expert but these were the things that struck me. Calum Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 2, 2011 Author Posted November 2, 2011 I enjoyed this. Although my feeling is that sometimes the huge bass at around 2.00 was a little out of time - it came in just after the 2nd beat but a little too soon. Also in terms of the timing, the section around 1.26 where you were glitching and playing around with the timing, i didn't feel like it stayed in time - although I could be wrong. I felt the sense of time was lost at this point - perhaps make it more rhythmically defined.Also the bit at 1.36 only came in ONCE! That's my fave part of the original - I'd love to see it return at the end perhaps. I'm certainly not a house expert but these were the things that struck me. Calum Thank you! I know exactly what you mean, I tried to make this as disjointed as possible, maybe I over did it XD I will try to do extention edits before upload the final. Quote
ectogemia Posted November 5, 2011 Posted November 5, 2011 I'm pretty confused. Why aren't you a posted remixer yet? This was excellent. Anyway, my one, single, and only complaint is the total silence at 1:58. I didn't like that at all. Maybe keep the reverb going to fill that space? Quote
Gario Posted November 5, 2011 Posted November 5, 2011 Loving it. I think there's a little clutter in the upper range of the soundscape, though - too many instruments that have that high range in it. Doing a high pass on a few of the instruments might help clean that up a little bit. The reverb, while appropriate, might also be creating some of the clutter that I'm hearing. If passing the instruments doesn't work well, cutting down on some of the reverb or high passing the reverb might just do the trick. Personally I find the silence to be very fitting to the style. Just putting that out there. I think this is great, though. Very fun stuff that I believe can pass, given that you fix the soundscape clutter a little bit. Quote
AngelCityOutlaw Posted November 5, 2011 Posted November 5, 2011 Chemical Remix is bitchin'. The silence doesn't bother me either. Actually, I really haven't found much to whine about. Therefore, this is worthy of a dance gif Quote
SuperiorX Posted November 6, 2011 Posted November 6, 2011 This is pretty sweet. I really love the disjointed house/techno vibe to the piece. I like it fits the chemical plant style great. Don't really have any constructive criticism here to add, just wanted to say I really enjoy this mix. EDIT: actually one question, why are there like 20 seconds of silence at the end of the track? I even turned my speakers up a bunch but I can't hear anything there... Quote
Cash Posted November 6, 2011 Posted November 6, 2011 I'm liking this, good work. I agree with Ectogemia, the silence bothers me. I feel like it breaks the momentum of the song. A minor complaint in a well done track. I've listened to a bunch of your songs, I really hope you become a posted remixer soon. Good luck! Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 6, 2011 Author Posted November 6, 2011 EDIT: actually one question, why are there like 20 seconds of silence at the end of the track? I even turned my speakers up a bunch but I can't hear anything there... Incase someone wants to add this to a set (but i forgot to leave them a drum beat lol) Im no longer submitting anytracks. Hell i'll sub something if you guys think I should Quote
Gario Posted November 6, 2011 Posted November 6, 2011 Well, you put it in mod review, so that implies that you want to sub it, bro. You will need to take the 20 seconds of silence off the end when you submit the track, though. The site hosts stand alone tracks, so mixing in tracks designed for DJs to mix into other songs creates a separation in the site. Just make the DJ version available elsewhere, or even request that a link to a site where you host the DJ version is put in the track description, if it's important to you. Like I said before, though, if you clean up the sonic clutter in the high ranges of the track (and remove the 20s of silence) I think this would have a very good chance at being posted. Quote
Level 99 Posted November 6, 2011 Posted November 6, 2011 Well, Mod Review DOES imply submitting a track. We've discussed this before: please don't set it to Mod Review unless you plan on submitting it. Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 6, 2011 Author Posted November 6, 2011 Ohhh, gotcha, guess I will sub this and upload the reupload I promised 4 says ago Fixed the the High ends on the spectrum (what I should have looked at because Im not using moniters) It was acrually the lead bass and the overtone synth. Also fixed the awkward ending Quote
SuperiorX Posted November 8, 2011 Posted November 8, 2011 So did you upload the reupload you mentioned 3 days ago that was a reupload of the reupload you promised from 7 days ago? Just excited to hear the polished up version Quote
Guifrog Posted November 9, 2011 Posted November 9, 2011 DirRrRrRrRrty! Detected a few timing issues from 0:48 to 0:55 and 1:29-1:35 btw. Still not too fond of the ending. But I dig it overall If you make your name onto the frontpage with this, I'm SO going to throw the biggest party. Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 9, 2011 Author Posted November 9, 2011 So did you upload the reupload you mentioned 3 days ago that was a reupload of the reupload you promised from 7 days ago? Just excited to hear the polished up version Im subing that version to Ocr (with a few edits on the complextro lines) Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 9, 2011 Author Posted November 9, 2011 DirRrRrRrRrty! Detected a few timing issues from 0:48 to 0:55 and 1:29-1:35 btw. Still not too fond of the ending. But I dig it overall If you make your name onto the frontpage with this, I'm SO going to throw the biggest party. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Quote
SuperiorX Posted November 9, 2011 Posted November 9, 2011 Im subing that version to Ocr (with a few edits on the complextro lines) Are you not planning on getting any more crits here before you sub? Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 9, 2011 Author Posted November 9, 2011 Are you not planning on getting any more crits here before you sub? Nope, im beleving in my cards this time Quote
SuperiorX Posted November 9, 2011 Posted November 9, 2011 Nope, im beleving in my cards this time Cool, good luck. That was just my selfish attempt at hearing the final product anyhow Quote
DjATIO Posted November 9, 2011 Posted November 9, 2011 this is sick man, really original i can tell you're using massive right? you got some cool sounds in there. man i need massive.. Quote
SonicThHedgog Posted November 9, 2011 Author Posted November 9, 2011 this is sick man, really original i can tell you're using massive right? you got some cool sounds in there. man i need massive.. FM 8 and combfilters and sylenth 1 for some bass. I dont really use massive anymore : / Quote
ectogemia Posted November 9, 2011 Posted November 9, 2011 QUICK, recommend some awesome comb filters for me, or at least synths that come with comb filters built in! Quote
AngelCityOutlaw Posted November 10, 2011 Posted November 10, 2011 What the hell is a comb filter? Quote
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