not bad, but it needs more work. it's not gonna make it past the judges as-is.
that beat gets tiresome, fast.
strings/choirs that come in right from the beginning are TOO LOUD and they stay that way the entire song. needs some dynamic variation.
cool lead but it's totally buried under the strings. the piano is a bit dull and fakey sounding.
lots of repetition and not enough variation throughout.
your samples aren't too bad - everything just needs some balance.
i know you've already submitted this, but i would really consider giving this some more work instead of sitting around in anticipation for the next 6 months, just to see it get rejected.
it's good, but not good enough. please reconsider.