awkwardness at 0:58, felt like there was a cymbal or something off by a 16th note but this could just be me. i'd get a second opinion on that.
the bass is sorta unnoticable during the heavier sections (sounds like its blending in with the rhythm guitar), and could definitely afford to be louder during that little feature at 2:11. i think raising the mids just a bit on the rhythm guitar might help balance the soundscape slightly better, as well as help separate it from the bass.
not too much for me to say, really. production sounds pretty clean, lots of cool panning effects and instrument placement, some awesome synth action as usual, and the guitar parts, while not revolutionary by any means, sounded good as well (of course i know nothing about the guitar). there's always some room for improvement, but i see this getting accepted as-is.
i enjoyed