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Hello again OCR. Fresh outta FL Studio/Live is the latest track on the Mini-Album, "2nd Atonement". Nothing overly complicated, but hope everyone enjoys though. Source:Atonement Track 5 - 2ndAtonement-Atonement Remix-

This sounds amazing man.

Pretty good stuff here. Nice use of samples from the original song - Simple but effective.

Heh. Unique, entertaining , and humbling all at once. Great stuff here.

Amazing K. Absolutely amazing; bought/downloaded this one as a result. Keep up the great work.

This tune does the job quite nicely Xenon. Nice work.

While not terrible, it could use work (as you said yourself). Main issue being that the Synth is too loud (main melody). But the intro was actually pretty nice though. As for more technical issues, I'll leave that to the guys who actually know what they're talking about.

Thanks for the answers L99-Keep up the good work.

Sounds pretty good man. Simple but effective.

Damn dude, this is incredible - and someone already addressed the synth feeling like it's fighting for the spotlight. So aside from that, I've no real gripes with this track.

...the track I just created. >_< Shameless, I know.

Although I only heard the samples on Amazon, the tracks all sound really good man; and way to assist a worth cause as well. Keep it up.

Not bad, man. Y'told quite the story here, although the actual rapping felt a bit so-so. Did you create the beat for this though?

Wow - this is really good L99! If you don't mind my asking - was what program did you use for the guitar?

Nice job here. Simple but effective.

Hello all - finally got around to finishing the 4th track for the remix album. Tried to do something different this time. Was having fun sampling the source for this one, and thus the below was born. I'm sure you can still recognize the song somewhat, but in any case I hope you enjoy. Source - Face it Later Track 4 - F.I.L-Face it Later Remix

Seriously man - this beat is crazy. Also a fan of Fei - would comment on the lyrics, but yeah; For a one take freestyle it's not too bad man.

Sounds pretty good MUM, but my only real gripe would be the synth you used for the main melody. Other than that, I really enjoyed it.

I agree with Mak - Very nice work here overall, but it does begin to sound a bit muddled when you bring the Wah Guitar into play.

Simple but effective. Well done.

haha amazing - You've painted quite the picture, both with your words and music. I personally don't hear hear any major issues with this beat though, and look forward to hearing your final mix; Good job here.

Quite the enjoyable mix you've produced here Chernabougue. Keep it up.

While I'm not a big fan of this style of music, I must say that it's a well put together and neat sounding remix Jace. You nailed the rave theme in my opinion. As for critique on dynamics and all that fancy stuff...I'll leave that to the pros.

Wow MX - Really like how this sounds(never heard the original remix you posted though). Great work here.

Interesting mix - but I gotta agree with Tables. Even if you covered the song note by note, more could've been added to it to flesh it out some more. Keep at it though.