MindWanderer

While this isn't my style of music, I can see what the judges mean. The bass is heavy and dirty, by which I mean that there are multiple parts around the same low frequency that get in the way of each other, and even individually they're loud enough to drown out the melody. IMO, you could make the bass lines quieter and with less reverb, perhaps pulling one of them into a higher register.

Revised per your recommendations. I pulled out the bass drums and gave them a whole lot more oomph and a little bit more variety. I mixed up the snare (maybe a bit too vampy, tell me what you think) and did add cymbals after all. I also killed the goofy tuba entirely, just replacing it with a kettle drum hit and a continuation of the melody. A bit less faithful to the source material but I like the result. It does make the ending a smidgen weaker, I'll have to think of a way to shore that up a bit.

Very nice ideas, kind of reminds me of soundtracks from 80's movies. But the instrumentation and balance do take away a lot from my enjoyment of it. The excellent Cossack tune is often drowned out by the driving rhythm. Production aside, there are a few disharmonic harmonies scattered throughout. When you get closer to a final product I'll try to pinpoint them.

I guess introducing myself doesn't hurt.... I have next to no music experience and next to no budget, but I'm not ready to let that stop me from trying! I can sing but not play any instruments, I have crappy headphones, and I'm using Rosegarden, Fluid 3, TiMIDIty, and LAME on Linux as my production tools. My first attempt is in the WiP forum... we'll see how this goes....

Thanks for the feedback! Now, please forgive me, as, as I said, I'm really new at this.... Variation on the percussion line I understand and can do. Some bass drum would be welcome, cymbals... I'll think about that. I don't want too much harsh metal noise in there. And by the high brass, did you just mean from 0:17 to 0:29 ("trumpet"), or the horn part ("English horn") through the whole thing? Odd that you said there was too much Charge and not enough Wily. From a purely source material perspective it's about 60/40. Melody-wise, from 1:23 to 2:39 is purely Wily, and most of the rest is either mixed harmony or not much like either source. The electric piano is from Charge Man and the bass line is from Wily. I agree that the tuba is a bit weird, but it's hard to be faithful to Charge Man without it or something like it. I'll think that over, and maybe someone else will have a helpful suggestion.

Hello all! I'm new here, and this is my first attempt at anything musical since taking Music 101 about 15 years ago, so constructive criticism is very, very welcome. But try to avoid jargon, if you can, as I'm ultra-new at this. The fatted lamb I bring to the table is ...But the Trains Always Ran On Time. Source material: Mega Man 5 (NES): Mega Man: Dr. Wily's Revenge (GB): Dr. Wily's Stage 1 My resources are pretty limited--I have a budget of $0 on a Linux machine--so if you have any production quality suggestions those are very welcome as well.