Dang, that's EWQL Silk? I really like that. Always wanted it, wallet always was like "nope."
Anyway, this is sounding a lot better. I think you need to pan the low strings (cello? double bass?) away from the low choir, just so they don't clash together. If this is already done, maybe do it a bit more, just to separate them. EQ areas of each differently so they aren't both hitting in the same frequency range. (edit: and be gentle with reverb on bass instruments. This quickly turns to mud.) The 2 leads, the left violin, and the right ewql silk instrument, At 2:55 the levels seem pretty great, but earlier on perhaps around 0:39 the violin sounds really sharp and exposed. Try EQing the high end down on the violin to make it a lot less sharp, maybe around 2khz or so but listen with your ears when you're doing it to make sure you're pulling back on the problem frequency, don't just take my word for it, I guessed. Then at 1:30 with the right silk instrument, it sounds a bit exposed. I think it'd be nicer panned right a bit more, maybe a touch more reverb, and maybe lower it by like 1.5db or so.
I'm still feeling that the violin early on is mechanical. Starting from 0:03. I can tell that you are putting some variance into the notes but the timing that the notes are played seems unnatural. It's good at 0:35, but before that, maybe try changing up the phrasing a bit so it sounds less fake. It's going to sound fake because it's EWQL strings, but there are things you can do to make it play more naturally. Mainly changing up the start and end times for each note, don't make it sound sloppy but make it sound much more natural. Maybe put a short break between some of the phrases where it's like the violinist playing it lifts his arm or something. Little things like that to make it seem more human. In the end, if you feel there's not too much you can do there, it couldn't hurt to just lower the volume slightly -- 1 or 2db.
Not sure how helpful this will be, but let's see what a mod thinks with their mod review.