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Thirdkoopa

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  1. I guess so I should elaborate a bit on the downer ending! I say it's a downer ending because it's a very introspective ending and fits in similar to the bittersweet nature of Final Fantasy Tactics (no spoilers but iykyk). I feel like I end up with more 'bombastic' endings a lot of the time but this was a more "Things will never be the same again, and that may not be okay" one.

    Still in disbelief at the high praise given to this track. 😭 Thank you all so, so much!

  2. On 6/19/2023 at 1:11 PM, timaeus222 said:

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    done

    Thank ya!

  3. 14 hours ago, timaeus222 said:

    Cool source tune, actually. I can see there being 3 distinct sections in the original, very remixable. Not sure if you wanted an official mod review here, but I'll just give my general feedback.

    Arrangement

    There's a good semblance of structure here. As far as implied dynamics go, it's a good spot. My main concerns would be in the production aspect.

    Production/Mixing

    I would focus on addressing the drums throughout. To me they seem like placeholder samples before you put in the actual ones.

    - The first moment where the drums are iffy is 1:04 - 1:15; you are using the same drum sounds here as in the main sections, whereas the dynamics here are meant to be lower. I'd swap these drums out for something more distant with a longer reverb tail.

    - At 1:15 and in similar spots, I thought there would be a cymbal to mark a major transition. That would do a lot by itself.

    - The snare rolls tended to have similar velocities, such as at 1:40, 2:47, and other major transitions. Try varying the velocities so that they sound like rolls (alternating intensities), as opposed to just maximally hitting the snare. :) It's very apparent at 3:04 where the military-like rhythm doesn't make too much sense unless you actually used an orchestral snare

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    Basically, what I've just said above boils down to:

    - treat the drums with more TLC by addressing their mechanical rhythm and intensities

    - take the time to choose more drum samples that are more appropriate for the implied dynamics of a given section

    - mark your transitions a bit more clearly with cymbals

     

     

    I really appreciate the feedback! @Hemophiliac knows I've been workshopping this one. I'll work towards having a version ready to review again.

  4. Mine that CAN be licensed:
    The Definition of Insanity (would require @Treyt posting it it to Spotify)
    Hallucinatory Province (will be on a future comp album)
    Down the Rabite Hole (will be on a future comp album)
    Song of the Desperado (planning to bundle all my FF8 tracks together in an EP.)

    Mine that CAN'T be licensed:
    Hope in 8

    None of these are on Spotify yet.

    I'll browse over some other artists these next couple of weeks.

  5. 6 hours ago, Hemophiliac said:

    Cool.  The bass is mixed too loud.  I kept thinking while listening, bari-sax would be really neat in this.  Arrangement is strong.  Really just needs better balancing amongst parts.

    Noted! I'll send over to our mixer. Might be able to add more bari sax in there too. (Also I forgot to put the review tag lmao)

  6. https://dodarchive.dwellingofduels.net/23-04-Free/25-Lucas Guimaraes%2C Cory Johnson%2C ImAFutureGuitarHero%2C Brandon Harnish%2C ThisIsJayC-Chrono Trigger-Tyrano's Stash-DoD.mp3

    Original Track: 


    Source Breakdown:
    0:00 - 1:00 - Intro from Source
    1:01 - 1:41 - A section from Source
    1:42 - 2:26 - B Section from Source
    2:27 - 3:04 - C Section
    3:05 - 3:24 - Combo of sources
    3:25 - 4:12 - Chords from Intro, mostly original.
    4:13 - 4:41 - Intro from Source motif returned; outro

    Contributors:
    Lucas Guimaraes - Arrangement, Saxophones
    ImAFutureGuitarHero - Bass, Drums, Auxillary Percussion
    Cory Johnson - Guitars
    Brandon L. Harnish - Sousaphone
    ThisIsJayC - Mix
    Please let me know anything I can fix up before sending it over for OCR Review!

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