I'm hearing some pretty obvious distortion on the louder sections, and I think while the arrangement is pretty sweet, it's harder to appreciate when there is crackling. Adjust the volume to a bit more sane level, and resub it. Very dramatic and I'd love for this to be on the site, but it needs a bit more polish on the levels. It does feel like it pretty much ends just when the peak is hit, which I guess is fine, but it loses a bit of structural excitement then. Having a longer ending, or something that doesn't suddenly amp up and then stop would be a stronger whole. Look at how long the different sections are. The intro builds for a super long time, and then when there isn't as much care put into the ending, it doesn't feel balanced.
No, please resubmit