Ok, yeah, this isn't "tonight", "tomorrow", or even "next week". Nearly next month. Sorry dude.
You've probably submitted it by now, but i'm still gonna give the promised rundown.
Liked the intro a lot better this time. Stutter was good idea, but execution wasn't QUITE there. Seems like it should've stuttered in a way that leads into the beat and gets punctuated on the downbeat by something, but not a huge deal.
Not sure why second stutter right after it was there, I'd remove it honestly.
Nice clean sound here with the guitars, good synth use. Drums have good presence and writing. I can't help feeling it could have a bit more power (snare specifically).
Man you REALLY improved the bridge section with the vocal sample.
Still sounds like some pumping at 3:39, 4:46 & 5:02 - watch those levels.
Solid stuff overall here dude.
Now, for some transparency. A big part of why I didn't reply to this initially: in my mind I could hear a ton of potential and room for a big orchestra to back this up. I was contemplating asking if you wanted to collab, but I really have a lot on my plate that's unfinished that I need to finish before taking anything else on. So, that's why I didn't bring it up.
After that, I forgot to come back and crit, so sorry man .