Hrmmm... I love the intro by the way. Too long winded IMO but and perhaps the little chippy bits should fade in and out a little smoother, but I was really digging the atmosphere. I actually quite like the synths, why do they remind me of a Genesis track? I dunno, there's this real retro quality to it all.
It goes on a bit without doing much and loops, you definitely need more variation. It is- admittedly cool though, the soundscape has this gritty quality; though, again, I think it could all 'mesh' a little smoother. It sounds over-compressed too. Perhaps drop the volume a little? Anyway good, looking forward to the next version!
EDIT- More panning on the synths? That would be pretty cool.