Hi Cash and Change
It's not easy to make a remix when the source material is only about 10 seconds long. But you did a good job.
I really like the parts at 1:20 and 1:58 (the first part is also nice), I like the grooves. Maybe you could seperate those parts a bit more. Because now it sounds to me like two buildups one after the other.
You could experiment with the form of the song. let's see, we have A (0:19), B (1:21), C (1:59) and A (2:30).
Here's an example: A, B then A again and C (Build up and climax).
It's only a suggestion but maybe it can give you some ideas.
Keep it up.