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  1. It's been a long while since I did any serious work, so here we go - a remix of Boss Battle 2 from Legend of Dragoon. While the last couple of Dragoon arrangements I did shifted the genre quite a bit, this time I decided to lean heavily into the original mood. I think it's largely finished, but there are still some things I'd like to touch up. Enjoy, and any feedback is welcome!

     

     

    And here's the original source:

     

  2. ...I'm not seeing what the problem is. I'm pretty sure djpretzel already cleared that one up...

    On 6/21/2021 at 7:58 PM, djpretzel said:

    You can do that for yourself, for your personal collection - absolutely, no one's stopping you, and why would they...

    The key word here is "redistributed" - if you're hosting/mirroring portions of the collection for *others*, yeah, we want the files to be official & unmodified. If you're remixing them, that's no longer redistribution of the original audio, it's a different ballgame entirely. Conversion to OGG wouldn't make much sense (lossy to lossy?) - @Liontamerhas done work on silence trimming so if you find mixes w/ 10+ seconds of true silence (no signal), let us know here. The bigger no-no that we're especially concerned with would be modifying tagging/attribution, FYI.

    ...And gave you a remedy if you do find one with excessive silence, while also clarifying that the no editing clause is mostly for redistribution. No one is stopping you from trimming the silence. FBI agents aren't going to show up at your house with warrant because you removed 3 seconds of silence at the end of a song. Several people have already clarified that these aren't intended for BGM and that if you want loop-friendly versions you should contact the original artist - and you should do that anyways if you want to use them, even if it's non-commercial.

    Really not sure why you're making this out to be a problem.

  3. Some key things that need attention:

    0:00 - 2:00;  The piano is very dry and lacking humanization here, particularly when the staccato starts around 0:23. I can sort of get what sound you were going for here, but when a pianist plays the keys in such a heavy handed way there are still some notable differences between each note. I'd suggest making use of the pedal here(and in slower sections in general) along with a softer velocity to help with the transition into the staccato portion of this section.

    2:00 - 4:00; There's a notable shift in the tone of the piano starting here, which makes the transition a bit jarring to my ears. It also feels like way to much pedal throughout this part - the reverb is causing the notes to bleed in an unpleasant way. Around 2:08 you've got some major clipping going on

    4:00 - 5:00; Much like the previous section, the pedal needs to be toned waaay back. Not only are the notes bleeding as before, but it's really muddying up the sound in this section, perhaps because of the high velocity of the notes.

    5:00+; That F-G-G#-A# progression sticks out a bit, due to the same humanization/velocity issues. 5:44 starts to sound pretty good, but the abrupt silence right before-hand is really out of place. Around 6:10 those machine-gun notes need a lot of work - both in terms of humanization and arrangement, as notes of that speed would be a bit of a challenge to play, especially in the context of this arrangement. Take a look at video, this video and watch how the pianist plays(particularly around the 0:15 mark) when repeating the same note. This video also does a great job explaining the specific techniques used in such a piece. At 6:22 it abruptly cuts off again.

     

    Overall it still needs a ton of work. Note velocity, pedal usage and humanization in general are extremely important areas in a piano arrangement. The arrangement itself is a promising concept, but the execution needs a lot of work.

  4. This arrangement was originally made a couple years ago for an album, but due to life I was unable to work finish it(or do much related to music for a while). I've finally found the time to get back into music, and I'd almost forgotten about this. I've polished it up a bit, but for the most part I consider it finished.

     

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  5. 4 minutes ago, Master Mi said:

    I'm still unsure if I add some drums in this melodic section of the preview - but I feel that this part without drums and with lots of melodic synths and VSTIs instead has its own charme somehow.

    I feel like it could work if you either added some high hat open/close fills. Alternatively, you could bring in some marching-styled percussion towards the end as you build up towards another heavy section.

  6. @Flurry of Flames

    Indeed, I didn't have enough time to really work on it and get all my ideas into place. As for the plugins, it's quite a list. The strings and woodwinds are Rhapsody Orchestral Colors, while the percussion(including the glockenspiel and xylophone) is Rhapsody Orchestral Percussion. The horns are all from Bravura Scoring brass, and the piano is Pearl Grand Piano. All of those are from Impact Soundworks.

    The solo trumpet is Chapman Trumpet by Embertone, and the flute is Passion Flute by Orange Tree Samples.

  7. Having not heard the original version since you originally posted it it's hard to draw direct comparisons, but many of the prior issues still remain. I still believe it's far too long. Right now you're still recycling the same segments over and over with very little variation, outside of instrument swaps. The brief flute solo at 4:42 was a nice change, and following it up with those piano variations was great, but you quickly went back into the same cut-and-paste segments, just with different instruments. I don't have a ton of time to go over everything, but I'll outline a few specific points:

    The good:
    - A lot of the solo/variation/etc writing is pretty solid, even if it's not particularly complex.
    -While there aren't a lot of dynamic variances, the mixing itself isn't bad.
    -The intro is still really nice. It had a fair amount of build-up and left me wondering where you would go.

    The bad:
    -The length of the song does not match the amount of content. I'd again suggest severely cutting the length of the song and focusing on the arrangement.

    -A lot of the instrumentation is still very robotic. Some of it could be attributed to lower quality samples, or perhaps not using the samples correctly. For example, staccatos at 3:28. As they're taking over the lead, it feels kind of odd writing it like that. A more flowing sustained section might work better, especially if you happened to have a well-timed brass section swell up alongside it rather than simply chugging along with the backbeat.

    -The song still ends abruptly. Even a fade out would be preferable to that.

  8. No problem. I, too, have seen some "different" variations. Things like "Stay in that fire, lady, get your back torn"(Instead of "So dare violate and get your back torn", which is what it does say) or "So violate an express-mic wave" which doesn't even make any sense. The official lyrics - particularly the rap portions -  are pretty hard to track down, but I got them as close as I could get. 

  9. @Flurry of Flames

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    Who's the one for you to count on?
    Won't turn from danger from now on?
    Accept the Burning Rangers, they're strong
    Check with yourself so y'don't get the facts wrong
    They're ready for trouble on this platform
    So dare violate and get your back torn
    Out of darkness, rise of justice
    Guys that save lives inside this crisis
    Darkness, but is it a tight risk?
    Blows and combos, dynamite miss
    It's a scene they're prepared to set (To what?)
    To handle theirs, to proceed the step
    To the next phase and to the next stage
    Givin' nightmares like Wes Crave
    So violators you best make way
    For real troopers make the future safe.

    Who are they, where are they coming from
    Risking their own lives
    Only one thing we know
    They're always with us, fighting for danger

    They are Burning Rangers - Go!
    They will never let you down!
    Hyper Burning Rangers - Wow!
    Don't you lose your hopes now!

    They will wipe out raging fire without fear,
    And they'll light up our future!
    Don't worry, just believe!
    They will be with you!

    The Rangers have nothing to hide,
    So as they fight they stand side by side
    For what's right, attacking with pride
    Protecting the people from all sorts of evil
    Troubling those who do wrong
    So violate and get your back torn
    You asked, "What's this?"
    "Is it justice?"
    Folks who save lives inside this crisis
    Darkness reaches a tight risk
    Combos, blows, dynamite miss
    It's a scene they're prepared to set
    To handle theirs, then proceed the step
    To the next stage and to our next phase
    Give em' nightmares like Wes Crave
    So violators you best make way,
    Because the Burning Rangers is here to stay.

    Don't give up!
    Don't say you wanna cry!
    Don't forget your smile!
    Coming in!
    Hold on tight!
    The power of our teamwork overcomes all!

    Yes, we are Burning Rangers - Go!
    They will never let you down!
    Max power! Burning Rangers - Wow!
    Don't you lose your hopes, yeah!

    We must be the light of hope for the ones
    Counting on us in the darkness
    Don't worry, just believe!
    We will be with you!

    (Never let you down)

    Burning Rangers Go!
    Burning Rangers Go!
    They will never let you down, no!
    Burning Rangers Go!
    Burning Rangers Go!

     

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  10.  

    Just another cover of that song from Season 2, Episode 2. This started as sort of a joke for a Rick and Morty-loving roomie and only covered the first half(what was originally in the episode), but I ended up doing the whole thing for both fun and a bit of practice. It's a (mostly) instrumental cover,  but I may get an actual vocalist to sing at some point. Feedback/Comments/Critique/Etc appreciated.

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